The Assembled Waiters
We all sit and wait.We wait in a room designed for waiting.We wait for our names to be called.Some wait nervously, fidgetingand checking their watches.Some wait patiently, reading old magazines.Some...
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From the title I envisioned something entirely different. You touched on a lot and covered much in this poem. Slammed me back to a few years ago...my husband had melanoma and this was a true...
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You painted a very clear and vivid picture here...yes seems like all you do in life is wait. I too wish you good news Wonderful poem Harry!
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Oh Harry, I have to do this very thing today. It made me smile to read this, knowing how much I dread that wait!I really identify with all you wrote, each line fits so perfectly.Best wishes for a...
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Greetings, Allura, Karen, & Sylvia ~~ My thanks to all three of you for your comments on my poem. I appreciate your reading my work. Allura, I hope your husband is doing well now. Sylvia, I hope...
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You captured the scene perfectly, the waiting and the anxiety for what the result will be So you cross the hanging gardens/and dream of being martyred/and the nails are falling hard/against the china...
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You hit the nail right on the top of the head with this one...great stuff.Dinah
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Greetings, Tlainya & Dinah ~ Thanks to you both! I am glad you both thought this captured the scene well.Cheers!HarryPlease come visit me at www.gillelands.com/poetry/ and check out my two 2005...
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i have high blood pressure and Im hypoglycemic and an HVC carrier, I constantly battle with choelsterol, ride my bike daily in the bad weather inside.. and use a treadmill.. but you sometimes still...
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